I've read
an article called “Laos holiday guide: plan the perfect two-week trip”. The
author of this article is Claire Boobbyer. It was published on the 21 of November. This article is about the best
places and sights to visit in Laos. It is something like a plan for creating the most wonderful
vacation in your life.
The article
can be logically divided into two parts. In the first, we know general
information about this country and its charming atmosphere. The author tells
us, that Laos is the perfect place to spend a luxury holiday, which we will never
forget in our lives. The second part is about special sights and routes which tourists can visit during their own holiday. The
author, also, gives information about prices of different tourists’ destination.
A lot of
attention is paid to describing geographical positions of the different parts
of the country, which, according to comments, are wrong, and at the same time
confuse the reader. Furthermore, there is a lot of unnecessary information,
such as telephone numbers (which can be change at any moment), names of unknown
people, long names and abbreviation of obscure organizations. Thereby, the
article begins to look like a boring mathematical report.
Fortunately,
there are some colorful pictures in the article, which attract attention and
dilute the situation, so a reader can distract at them.
In conclusion, I would like to say, that it would be more fascinating if the author payed attention to problems encountered while traveling and solutions for them, shared her own opinion and impression about visited places and gave some practical pieces of advice. In addition, I think that this paved route will be useful only for high-ranking person, whose salary is more than 3000$ a month.
And how do
you think is it a good idea to spend your semi-annual salary on holiday time?
You can
find the article here: http://www.theguardian.com/travel/2015/nov/21/laos-what-to-do-in-two-weeks
Great rendering and interesting point of view. I agree with you that there are a lot of not unnesessary, but boring informations about phone numbers and names. As for me it should go like an addition to this article for travellers. I like your way of discribing this article and I noticed you as a great photographer, because as for me this pictures are just for beauty, but you found there the solution of the problem with article.
ОтветитьУдалитьBut I must say concernig your question that we live only once and I agree it is impossible to have expensive holiday time every year, but once you can do it!
Great rendering! It was very interesting to read! I absolutely agree with your point of view that there are lots of unnecessary information that travelers can get to know later if they want to visit this wonderful place. Concerning your question I think that it’s not very good idea to spend your semi-annual salary on holiday time because with our modern life everyone should keep some money in reserve and not spend them all on a week of relax after the six months of hard labor working. So if it’s possible to find better and cheaper place for holyday and to save your money on something else, you should try it immediately.
ОтветитьУдалитьIt is a fascinating rendering! I think there are many places which are worth visiting. Many people save money during a year or more and decide to visit such place. Other people have enough money to afford such wonderful trip. But as for those who are to save money day by day, month by month and spend all their semi-annual salary on holiday time, I think it must be only if it is a really lovely place and they want to visit it very much. As for me, I would save some money and visit the place I dream about.
ОтветитьУдалитьDear girls! Thanks a lot for your opinion! I'm glad that you liked it! =))
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